Hoboweasel's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mona Lisa]

Lawl

Pretty funny, though you should have made it with a smile, not a frown. Also, shadowing would help here too. Still like it though.

[Vegetable Monster]

Kinda looks like a radish xD

Nice job! I like the design... though it would probably look better with shadowing... Maybe give some nostrils or something too.

[Forge Dwarf]

Blacksmithing ftw!

Nice job on this one as well, the head should be a tad larger though, to add to the proportion of the body...

[lucky dwarf!]

Hobo...

Cool drawing, I like the background, it adds a lot. You should have him with larger eyebrows and stuff to make him look more norse. Also try making your the waist larger, it would add realism.

[Dragon Rider]

Nice one...

I'd have to say this is probably your best work I've seen so far! Add a little more shadowing to it though.... oh, and check out my art if you have the time.

[Russian Soldier]

I think that's mongolian... but whatever...

Nice drawing... but try something that will get you fuller colors, that would add to it.

[Naruto]

EPIC CHIBI!!!

I don't really like Naruto anymore, kind of did during the beginning... but this is a really cool drawing, I love your style! A tad bit sketchy though...

[Shadow quest]

Interesting design... no I'm not reading all that.

HUGE description... but I like the art... arms are a little messed up though

[Peaceful]

It's hard to get faces down, don't worry... xP

Try making the head a bit rounder, mouth a tad larger, the face longer and closer to the shoulders (just a bit though), also a nose would help (though if you wanted to draw this way out of style I would still recommend making the face a bit longer). But you pretty much have the proportion down otherwise. The light reflected off their hair indicates they're in direct light, so keep that in mind... Nice work though.

[Parrot]

Nice work

I've done a lot of drawings of birds myself (still trying to find an older journal with more of my drawings in it, but still). It's rather well done, and I really like that there's some one out there who draws well using pencils (please don't be mechanical xD). You need a tad more shading and detail on this work though... otherwise it's fairly accurate.

drop-of-water responds:

thanks :D you noticed my weak point there :P I'm not very good at shading but I'll keep on trying. I'll also keep your tips and comments in my mind :) ( And I'm not mechanical ;) )