Hey, I get where you're coming from...
Comedy and reviewing things mix well together, and Egoraptor does that pretty well. Still, it was a bit of a copycat move, I understand you probably think of him as your idol (maybe not to that extent but still) and you want to try and do a tribute. But something done your own way would make you stand out a lot more.
As for the movie... really incoherent... not that much like Egoraptor except for the style... Ugh... not really that funny either, I'm sorry man.