Hoboweasel's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[blood over]

Huh, never heard of it...

Anyway, I like the chibi sort of art direction. The expression on the maid's face is a bit distressing however o-o Still, nice detail and it's pretty funny.

[Zero]

Divide, ddddivide by... by..... KSsShHtT....

Cool, the silhouette is an interesting aspect of the picture. I like how the grass makes it seem dynamic and as if there's wind or something. Head should be a bit smaller though, and the tree needs some work (It's kinda hard to make a realistic tree though, I'll admit). Still looks a bit sketch in general, should have put more time into it. Though the concept is interesting, and I like the shooting stars.

[Love?]

Liked how you did this.

The waist seems too small, though it might have worked if you made the front part of their skirt longer so it would seem it was just perspective. As for the legs, they seem a bit skinny and small etc., though they might look better if the left was in front of her left elbow... The upper lip looks a bit too outlined, and the umbrella looks a bit big, idk, otherwise I really like the style. And the pose is pretty cool too, interesting censorship. The rest of the body and the face are fairly proportionate and detailed as well. You should edit this (I'm assuming it's in pencil) and color it, it would look awesome.

[DED Pallor]

Epic!

There's a few problems though... The white lines on the torso goes a bit too far back and aren't as strong on certain areas (you kind of mentioned this but I'm going into detail), so it looks indistinguishable with the background to some extent, same thing with the legs or whatever, but now that I see it, it looks really cool! Couldn't tell that the zig zag was part of his head at first either (maybe add some lines on it...), but the design and style looks pretty awesome man! Great job!

[Hailorca Heavy Infantry]

Nice

Really like the design, pretty original as well. Though the head kind of reminds me of Dog.

Rhunyc responds:

Thanks man, and D.O.G. was a major influence in designing this guy. :D

[green lantern]

Awesome man!

This is really well drawn! It's proportionate, stylized, and precise. Really great job!

ts3ts3 responds:

thank you!!!

[TIP#4]

Errr random.

Well, it's okay, but again, try making it more symmetrical (I.e. more precise).

[happy halloween]

Lol

Nice work, put more time into it and you'll have something really cool :D
Try pre-drawing in pencil before you do pen though, it helps.