Pretty nice
Though I gotta say, the main riff with the synth in the beginning would sound nicer replaced by acoustic guitar. As well, that buzzy sounding instrument or whatever is a bit out of place as well... Eh, overall though, the tune is pretty nice, liked the guitar that DID come in eventually though (if that was a guitar). Idk, I'd just suggest some instrument changes to try and match the beginning feel of things. Really nice though, professionally done.
Hmm, you mean the chime at the beginning? I dunno about the guitar for that, spent a fair bit of time getting the stereo balance correct between two synths for that sound, I kinda like it. :d As for the sci-fi lead, yeah, you're not alone thinking that. I may still adjust the filter on it to blend it in a little nicer.
Thanks for the critical review, hoboweasel! :)
Good one
It's got some nice deviations in the beat but it still keeps its rhythm and everything. Makes me want to do that trippy dream flash I was thinking about even more... Just wish I didn't have so much work to do xP
Yeah, real work is heinous when it gets in the way of online fun. :P hehehe, 'tis the reason it took me so long to get back into pumpin' out tunes. :) You're more than welcome to use this if you ever get around to it though!
Thanks for the listen and the kind review, Hoboweasel. :)
Honestly, choppy and electronic sounding...
You probably shouldn't have attempted this because the only way to do it correctly is to actually get a damned orchestra, not use some computer program... There's really no way to mimic the feeling of an actual orchestra.
Well you see. I did this a while ago when i just started to make music. Also. I never said that it would be as good as the original.
Really cool
I like the beat, kind of reminds me of the end of Halo when the arc is blowing up or whatever...
It's a tad short though... and why the 10 seconds of nothing? ._.
This was indeed inspired by the Halo theme song; good ear!
It's a tad short only because it's logo music. Logos aren't usually on for a long time.
10 seconds of nothing becaaaaaaaaaaaause I had it set to cut off when there was absolutely no sound
Apparently the program still heard something!
Thanks for the review
Pretty cool!
Nice beat and composition, it's interesting. I think this should probably be in either new wave, or techno though.
thx for your response!
Hoorah, social insensitivity
Yeah, I've been through something like this, not to this extent, just enough to expect this kind of thing. Really cool lryics, very powerful.
Thanks bro!
Holy shit...
This is way too familiar to me... o_e" The lyrics are really good, and I like the feeling to it. However, don't want to sound insulting, but I would have preferred another vocalist. Maybe some distortion as well, especially when you repeat that one verse "tears of a child".
Eh.... as I've said, I recognize that I'm still working on the right voice
Very powerful...
It's composition is very well put together and flows, while also giving you a sense of deep emotional infectiousness. Altogether, this is an incredible and moving piece, great Job!
Thanx for the very beautiful words. Really appreciate.
Lulz...
I should do a cover art or something for this xDDD
Soooooooooooooo do it.
Really good!...
...But you didn't write this based off of J.D. Sallinger, so I hate you! :D Jk xD
Impressive work! You're very talented! :J Song reflects the poem as well.
DUDE THE GUY WHO WROTE CATCHER IN THE RYE!!!!!!
I WILL HELLA WRITE ON HIM!!!! THAT'S LIKE ONE OF MY FAVORITE BOOKS EVAR>
God Holden Caulfield is so goddamn emo, I love him.
I like you. You're cool.
Thanks for the high scoring and whatnot, and the review. XD
J.D. Salinger.... haha
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